The National Review’s K-Lo has posted Harriet Miers’ Supreme Court application essay over at The Corner. My first thought upon reading it: “Isn’t anyone checking her homework?” A week after David Brooks famously savaged her vague and tortured prose, Miers still has a Yoda-like tendency to deliver non sequiturs in the passive voice.
I couldn’t resist taking a red pen to the piece. While it’s still far from adequate, I believe I’ve rendered a substantial improvement. Click here for the revision.
Posted by Marie Gryphon on October 18, 2005